Friday, September 26, 2014

Voice Week Day 5 — Beautiful Chaos

It's the last Voice Week day which is actually kinda sad for me. I really enjoyed writing these this week. All the comments I've been getting have been huge confidence boosters so thank you to all who commented, it's really encouraging to read your thoughts ^ ^.
On a random side note, my OCD is very pleased that there's five different badges: one for each day. If there was seven, I might just go insane XD

Well, I suppose we should get on with the final writing then, shouldn't we? Onwards!

I sit on the worn porch to my house and look up at the stars. There's a certain wisdom about them that doesn't let my eyes stray. Their glow is so sincere and true. Nothing within them questions what they’re doing. I envy them.
A shooting star glides through the sky, it’s tail leaving a breif stain in the sky almost as though a painter took his brush to it. I follow it’s path with my eyes. In space, life is chaotic but alluring—nothing like mine. How do they exist with such a simple idea of who and what they are, of where they belong even? Stars, tell me your secret.


Well there you have it, the last one. To read more posts like this, check out the Voice Week blog.
Thanks for all the support from those who have been following and commenting, it means a lot :) 

8 comments:

  1. Again, someone more laid back and reflective, like yesterday, but I get the feeling this is an older person. They've lived through quite a bit, but instead of growing jaded with the stars, they've learned to appreciate them more.

    Great finish to a great week!

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    1. Yes, this person definitely has been through a lot. I'm glad you were able to pick up on that!
      Thank you :)

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  2. A dreamy voice... someone who has all the time in the world to mull over the wonders of nature. Very creative.

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    1. If only we all had so much time to do so...thank's so much ^ ^

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  3. Ah, the dreamer. I'm glad someone is still inspired by stars even if they are fictional! I saw a load of shooting stars when I was at the cottage with frinds a few weeks ago. They all thought I was imagining it! Good stuff this week - simple topic taken 5 different ways.

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    1. There has to be at least one person who's inspired ;)
      Lucky! I love shooting stars, I don't get to see them nearly enough.
      Thanks for reading and commenting!

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  4. I get this as someone searching for answers. Perhaps sad. Pretty piece. :)

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    1. Yes, they're looking for answers, you're right about that. Thanks!

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