tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-562948101006293885.post7622468210314487041..comments2023-09-01T00:49:36.010-07:00Comments on Dimensions of My Universe: Voice Week Day 3 — Paradox of the StarsCassia Schaar http://www.blogger.com/profile/04836274182415901787noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-562948101006293885.post-25558394230823017822014-10-01T16:09:21.288-07:002014-10-01T16:09:21.288-07:00Yeah, they're not a happy character...
Thank y...Yeah, they're not a happy character...<br />Thank you ^ ^ Cassia Schaar https://www.blogger.com/profile/04836274182415901787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-562948101006293885.post-85329282447659007412014-10-01T16:08:44.280-07:002014-10-01T16:08:44.280-07:00Thank you :) Thank you :) Cassia Schaar https://www.blogger.com/profile/04836274182415901787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-562948101006293885.post-26388625236739105962014-10-01T16:07:57.490-07:002014-10-01T16:07:57.490-07:00That's a great way to describe it, you're ...That's a great way to describe it, you're bang on! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Cassia Schaar https://www.blogger.com/profile/04836274182415901787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-562948101006293885.post-67771781416955805402014-10-01T16:04:16.489-07:002014-10-01T16:04:16.489-07:00That's a good point about the subconsciousness...That's a good point about the subconsciousness. Habits tend to be subconscious...I never thought of that until you brought it up. Thanks for pointing it out!<br />And also, thanks for commenting :) Cassia Schaar https://www.blogger.com/profile/04836274182415901787noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-562948101006293885.post-88229095254754107702014-09-29T12:31:11.783-07:002014-09-29T12:31:11.783-07:00I get a lot of anger and bitterness. I love how th...I get a lot of anger and bitterness. I love how the description really reflects that too.<br /><br /><a href="%E2%80%9D//storitorigrace.blogspot.com%E2%80%9D" rel="nofollow">Stori Tori's Blog</a><br />Victoria Grace Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01849013182543674707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-562948101006293885.post-78729819944022697772014-09-25T19:17:16.228-07:002014-09-25T19:17:16.228-07:00oooh, a much angrier version this time, and I like...oooh, a much angrier version this time, and I like the depth you add by showing that the used to believe!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-562948101006293885.post-14892804294267056282014-09-25T09:10:18.241-07:002014-09-25T09:10:18.241-07:00Whoa. Now this person seems to be a dreamer who...Whoa. Now this person seems to be a dreamer who's trying to force themselves to be more logical for some reason. I like the visceral descriptions of running, bleeding, glaring.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-562948101006293885.post-36848988885442102172014-09-25T09:09:25.839-07:002014-09-25T09:09:25.839-07:00An intriguing mix of poetry and disillusionment. W...An intriguing mix of poetry and disillusionment. Without even knowing why this character is so angry/frustrated, I feel some sympathy.<br /><br />I was a little confused, though, about the use of "subconscious." Surely it is the character's subconscious that is automatically wanting to wish, out of habit, and it's the conscious thought, the memory of whatever has made the character bitter, that stops her (I'm not sure why, but the character strikes me as a "she").Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com